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Letter from the Home Fires by ~completeaccident:iconcompleteaccident:



You asked me for news from my side of the rock.
I wrote, as the days passed,
that it rains here, and I can hear you moving.
I wrote in charcoal, on the drier walls,
that the sunsets have been stunning, have been made
of dreamstuff bled across the sky
and every good one makes me wonder where you are going
when your feet scratch against stone.
The news from my side is that I keep
my nose to the wind, my ear to the breeze,
and walk on soft feet. The red rock,
the pink sky, the sun dying every night
the way we all would like to die:
Those are the news from my side of the rock.

I'll keep you my story for the quiet years,
when, with wrinkled smiles, we can sit to talk again.
I'll tell you how fires burned
on dim night horizons, and legends rode past carrying banners,
what smoke smells like at a distance.
You'll tell me how blazes
carried away lovers, drove you to ground
and ruined the sky,
how passion screamed in starlight and wolves
called.

If there is time, before we dry out together
and crumble to dust, I will dig
the other stories from the back of the cave:
lazy days of hunger to save our pennies,
the warm, slow rot of dread
or yearning that, quiet, interrupts
my sleep.
There is news from my side
of sweet memory smiles lifted lonely into the night wind,
set adrift
to chase the sound of your feet.
©2007-2009 ~completeaccident
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Author's Comments

This is the first of the three Red Rock poems (Letter from the Home Fires, Where the Desert Sleeps, and Piss and Fury).

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:icondizziowl:
Oh, my gosh. i really like this. Wonderful imagery and sweet, without being sickening, sentiments. :)
:iconzephyrchaser:
I'd been getting really sick of the yellow-pink sunrises lately. I kind of like them again now.

Oddly enough the thing I liked most about this was the sensation of feet scratching against stone.
:iconcompleteaccident:
Thank you! :heart: And thank you for the fav. I'm glad it's not sickening... I felt like I was treading the line, in some places. ;)
:iconcompleteaccident:
xD It's so funny that you should say that. It was the sensation of feet scratching against stone that made me write this. I mean, there were a lot of things that made me write it, but the thing that made my fingers itch for a pencil was the sense of feet on stone. The image of a hillcave and fires in the distance built itself around that, and I couldn't help it. So you rock. xD :heart:
:iconmanchaliaina:
That's good news, that is. :heart:

--
since You won't give guarantees, I'll be cashing in
I'll do this last one, then I'll grow me some wine


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:iconflappability:
i adore the texture of your words.

it's almost 4am in seattle, and i'm trying to finish a self portrait, and i think after reading this, your poem provided a feeling of warmth echoic enough for me to keep going.

I think i shall watch you.

--
-- F.
"like two mammoths tusk-locked in ernest sport at the edge of the advancing ice age, you were my mystery and i was your mystery and in time we discovered that mystery was our home."
-l.cohen
:iconcompleteaccident:
Thank you for your comment. :heart: It's strange and fun to be called back to these old poems by someone else's discovery of them. I'm glad it warmed you-- your comment warmed me!

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